PrettyGeek's Reviews

[Animated Teaser 05: He Is Risen]

I always love your animations, but they're SO SHORT. When I watch them on Youtube the ads end up being longer. #merp

ibrabdo responds:

sadly yes they r short, but requires a lot of work, the same time to execute one of those i can do 5 youtube ADs :D thx tho :)

[Pathfinder (With Friends)]

I love the idea (kinda reminds me of a podcast I used to listen to that was just a group of friends playing dnd), and the animation just positively toes the line of animated and too cartooney. Just really really wish that it was longer!

[The Tale Teller]

Thanks for making me cry, y'all! This was done so very well, with a unique and fitting art style, a good pace, and a heart-breaking wee prose.

[Dotzz]

Not very easy to play on computer, especially not on a touchpad. Addicting on mobile, though. The touchscreen aspect is really good!

[Cerebral Game Stew]

I like the concept. I could see it being a good time waster, but there needs to be an explanation, tutorial, or rules page before starting.
*Not touchpad nor mobile friendly*

[Asgard Skill Master]

Cute idea and graphics, but the battle system is really time-consuming and boring. Even if there was something other than an auto attack it would seem more involved than waiting out a timer.

anniedududu responds:

Oh, that's a cool idea!

[Suo's revenge with his Legendary Axe]

The crispness of the foreground plays very well with the softness of the creature in the background, but my eyes want more dimension. The shapes/proportions of both the monster and the warrior confuse me. ((Also-is the warrior naked?)) Your use of texture is really innovative-especially with the sand leaving the warriors feet! I'm sure that you'll progress very far!
Good luck in the COTM!!!

Enjoyyourlife8 responds:

Huugely thank you for your words my friend, really liking your answer!
After I uploaded the pic, me and a friend had a discussion what I could have done more, and we realized the same about that you mention with the dimension. And then even I should have needed to add some extra little orange lightning from the front that could have done a bigger effect.
(Yeah, it's a jungel legend so he is ... oh .. That's why I tried to place the axe a little in front of the butt, but maybe counts like a M rate that little? I was thinking my self is so minimal view of the butt cheek so it's oky haha :D )
Thank you my friend once again for the words, and good luck to you to, we are all a winner and getting free knowledge out of this no matter!! :)

[That was hard ;_;]

Structurally fairly sound, but keep practicing on pushing that dimension! I really like some of the textures you're pulling into! You've got the talent-just keep developing those skills!

[Guardian Angel]

Very well done-great structure and use of colour!
I feel like you could take the light/shading (mostly shading) one step further, especially in the midground to give the piece even better dimension. Good luck on the COTM!!!

Djoresh responds:

Thanks PrettyGeek, Yeah shading remains a problem.
I wanted to take it further but I was really close to midnight in my timezone.
Could have been much more, but it is what it is.
You also good luck!